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Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Haha...my personal narrative?

Since school started I have been stressed out of my mind. I have tons of homework and extra-curricular things to do and this darn thing just added to my load. I must say that as fun as it was to wrack my brain trying to single out an important event in my ever so exciting life...well it wasn't. Some of the problems with my paper: not much dialogue, very childish, I probably could have used better built sentences and also could have made the story flow better than it did. In fact the paper is probably going to make poor Professor Elliott cry and have nightmares for some weeks to come. Sorry Professor. Sooooo not looking forward to writing another paper..

2 comments:

  1. Jarred, I think everyone had a problem with dialogue. It was definitely one of the more challenging things about the essay in general... I am curious to know what your essay is about though. I'm nervous for this next paper too. Not going to lie.

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  2. hey jarred, could you email me your email address so I can send you my paper? thanks in advance.

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